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09 April 2010 @ 10:14 pm
Flying  
Title: Flying
Author: LaughtersMelody
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Disclaimer: Sheppard isn’t mine, but I promise I’ll bring him back in one piece. Um…mostly.
Genre: General
Pairing: None.
Type: Ficlet.
Spoilers: No spoilers in this one. :)
Characters: John Sheppard
Secondary Characters: Teyla Emmagan, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex
Summary: Sheppard has always known he’d die in battle. Implied character death.

A/N: This bunny jumped me out of no where. Fair warning for anyone who doesn’t like character death, I’m one of the odd people who does, lol. :)

I hope everyone had a very happy Easter! Praise God, Jesus is Risen! :)

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Flying

Sheppard has always known he’d die in battle. It’s never been something he could explain, just a gut feeling.

He’s always trusted his gut.

So, when the impact of a bullet throws him back into the dirt, he’s not really surprised. If anything, he’s more surprised that it hadn’t happened sooner.

The pain doesn’t hit immediately. It’s more of a pressure at first, a sharp, steady pressure that makes it hard to breathe.

The noise of the battle raging around him fades away, and he blinks up at the alien sky above.

Perfect weather for flying, he thinks.

Teyla blocks the view a moment later. She rips open a field dressing and presses it to his chest. The pain awakens and John gives a choked cry, the sound thick with the blood welling in his throat.

Teyla says something but he can’t hear her. Rodney’s there a second later, blue eyes wide, panicked. John can’t hear him either, but he can tell that Rodney is yelling. A minute after that, John can feel the ground vibrating with heavy footsteps, and then Ronon is crouching down beside him. When Ronon looks at John’s chest, his expression turns grim.

If John didn’t already know how bad it is, that would have told him.

The pain dulls again, numbness returning, despite the pressure Teyla is putting on the wound. He wishes he could say something, but he can’t find the energy to form words.

Distantly, he feels someone holding his hand. He’s not sure who it is, but it doesn’t matter. His team’s here. They’re okay, even if he’s not.

And when he closes his eyes, he’s flying.

Fin

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A/N: I hope you enjoyed -- is that the right word, lol? -- it! Please let me know what you think!

Take care and God bless!

-Laughter

 
 
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( 20 comments — Leave a comment )
Tridget[info]tridget on April 10th, 2010 05:41 am (UTC)
Beautiful. Heartbreaking, but beautiful.
laughtersmelody: John Sheppard[info]laughtersmelody on April 10th, 2010 06:34 am (UTC)
Thank you!
syble4: converg1[info]syble4 on April 10th, 2010 05:50 am (UTC)
Very heartbreaking. Nicely done.
laughtersmelody: John Sheppard[info]laughtersmelody on April 10th, 2010 06:35 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! :)
Harikari: sga:shep:flyboy[info]hari_kari on April 10th, 2010 05:52 am (UTC)
So sad, but lovely. Well done.
laughtersmelody: John Sheppard[info]laughtersmelody on April 10th, 2010 06:31 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! :) (I love your icon, by the way!)
sgafan[info]sgafan on April 10th, 2010 06:02 am (UTC)
gorgeous. Very straight forward and so in character voice. Poignant. Loved it.
laughtersmelody: John Sheppard[info]laughtersmelody on April 10th, 2010 06:29 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! :) I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!
.[info]padawan_aneiki on April 10th, 2010 02:48 pm (UTC)
*sob* I hate character death but I can see this. *sniffle*
laughtersmelody: John Sheppard[info]laughtersmelody on April 13th, 2010 12:02 am (UTC)
Thank you! :) *hugs you and offers kleenex*
Nicky Gabriel: death[info]nickygabriel on April 10th, 2010 07:54 pm (UTC)
They’re okay, even if he’s not.
This line is so... John! :)
Well done!
laughtersmelody: John Sheppard[info]laughtersmelody on April 13th, 2010 12:04 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! :) I'm so glad you think it fits Sheppard well!
Erika: John neck[info]x_erikah_x on April 10th, 2010 09:09 pm (UTC)
Aaawwww. That is so John.
laughtersmelody: John Sheppard[info]laughtersmelody on April 13th, 2010 12:00 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! :)
aries_taurus[info]aries_taurus on April 11th, 2010 02:20 am (UTC)
really good. I tend to write shuch things... so I like.
laughtersmelody: John Sheppard[info]laughtersmelody on April 13th, 2010 12:00 am (UTC)
Thank you! :) Lol, I'm glad I'm not the only one who likes character death, lol.
schneefink[info]schneefink on April 11th, 2010 09:48 am (UTC)
Very well done. Not overly dramatic and so him.
laughtersmelody: John Sheppard[info]laughtersmelody on April 12th, 2010 11:58 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you thought that it fit SHeppard well. :)
T. F. Crosby[info]probiewankenobi on July 22nd, 2010 06:35 am (UTC)
This is the way I see Sheppard biting the dust (I'm sure I could put that another way, but I don't think he'd mind).

Though I prefer maiming characters (the ones I like, anyway) as opposed to killing them ('cuz we know torture's so much better) this was really good. Very Sheppard. I doubt he'd really care how he died as long as his team was with him.

Well done.
laughtersmelody: John Sheppard[info]laughtersmelody on July 22nd, 2010 07:31 am (UTC)
Thank you! :) Lol, I don't think Sheppard would mind you saying that either, lol.

That's how I picture Sheppard dying too. I was actually inspired with the last line first, and wound up writing the fic around it. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!
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